From: "Power, Ciara" <ciara.power@intel.com>
To: "Mcnamara, John" <john.mcnamara@intel.com>,
"dev@dpdk.org" <dev@dpdk.org>
Cc: "thomas@monjalon.net" <thomas@monjalon.net>,
"Mcnamara, John" <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
Subject: Re: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v1] doc: update release notes for 20.05
Date: Fri, 22 May 2020 15:32:10 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <DM6PR11MB2555851D269030DDF8924430E6B40@DM6PR11MB2555.namprd11.prod.outlook.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1590156366-12837-1-git-send-email-john.mcnamara@intel.com>
Hi John,
>-----Original Message-----
>From: dev <dev-bounces@dpdk.org> On Behalf Of John McNamara
>Sent: Friday 22 May 2020 15:06
>To: dev@dpdk.org
>Cc: thomas@monjalon.net; Mcnamara, John <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
>Subject: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v1] doc: update release notes for 20.05
>
>Fix grammar, spelling and formatting of DPDK 20.05 release notes.
>
>Signed-off-by: John McNamara <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
>---
> doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst | 264 +++++++++++++++--------------
>----
> 1 file changed, 116 insertions(+), 148 deletions(-)
>
>diff --git a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst
>b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst
>index 8470690..d10a1f4 100644
>--- a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst
>+++ b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst
<snip>
>
> * **Updated Telemetry Library.**
>
>- The updated Telemetry library has many improvements on the original
>version
>- to make it more accessible and scalable:
>+ The updated Telemetry library has been significantly in relation to
>+ the original version to make it more accessible and scalable:
I think there may be a word missing - "significantly improved in" might
have been intended here.
<snip>
- Ciara
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2020-05-22 15:32 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2020-05-22 14:06 John McNamara
2020-05-22 15:17 ` Kevin Traynor
2020-05-25 10:04 ` Mcnamara, John
2020-05-22 15:32 ` Power, Ciara [this message]
2020-05-24 22:56 ` Thomas Monjalon
2020-05-25 9:56 ` Mcnamara, John
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