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From: "Mcnamara, John" <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
To: "Ye, Xiaolong" <xiaolong.ye@intel.com>,
	"Kovacevic, Marko" <marko.kovacevic@intel.com>
Cc: "dev@dpdk.org" <dev@dpdk.org>,
	"Richardson, Bruce" <bruce.richardson@intel.com>,
	Stephen Hemminger <stephen@networkplumber.org>
Subject: Re: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v4] doc: introduce openwrt how-to guide
Date: Fri, 17 Jan 2020 13:46:26 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <MWHPR1101MB2158BEADC075D5051D783D61FC310@MWHPR1101MB2158.namprd11.prod.outlook.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20191216030109.99125-1-xiaolong.ye@intel.com>

Hi,

Overall looks good. Some notes below:

> +
> +.. note::
> +
> +	For compiling the NUMA lib, run libtool --version to ensure the
> +libtool version >= 2.2, otherwise the compilation will fail with errors.


This continuation line isn't indented and raised a build error:

    $ make doc-guides-html                                
    sphinx processing guides-html...
    /work/dpdk_docs/doc/guides/howto/openwrt.rst:80: WARNING: 
    Explicit markup ends without a blank line; unexpected unindent.

Also you should used spaces not tabs for indentation in the docs.

> +If you are using Windows PC, you can use some free and opensource raw
> +disk image writer program such as
> +``Win32 Disk Imager`` and ``Etcher`` to write OpenWrt image
> +(openwrt-x86-64-combined-ext4.img) to a USB flash driver or USB SDcard
> with SDcard or a Sata hard drivre or SSD from your PC.

Typo: drive

I'll send you a few other suggested minor corrections.

John


  parent reply	other threads:[~2020-01-17 13:46 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 31+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2019-11-29  8:19 [dpdk-dev] [PATCH] " Xiaolong Ye
2019-11-29 10:09 ` Bruce Richardson
2019-11-29 15:03   ` Ye Xiaolong
2019-11-29 16:59 ` Stephen Hemminger
2019-12-01 11:30   ` Ye Xiaolong
2019-12-02  6:34 ` [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v2] " Xiaolong Ye
2019-12-02  7:31   ` Jerin Jacob
2019-12-02  8:09     ` Ye Xiaolong
2019-12-12  2:25 ` [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v3] " Xiaolong Ye
2019-12-16  3:01 ` [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v4] " Xiaolong Ye
2019-12-19  6:05   ` Zhang, Xiao
2020-01-17 13:46   ` Mcnamara, John [this message]
2020-01-18  1:52     ` Ye Xiaolong
2020-01-18  5:48 ` [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v5] " Xiaolong Ye
2020-01-22 12:34   ` Mcnamara, John
2020-02-16 11:04   ` Thomas Monjalon
2020-02-16 17:29     ` Ye Xiaolong
2020-02-16 18:02       ` Thomas Monjalon
2020-02-17  1:18         ` Ye Xiaolong
2020-02-17  3:12           ` Dmitry Kozlyuk
2020-02-17  6:21             ` Ye Xiaolong
2020-02-17  2:47 ` [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v6] " Xiaolong Ye
2020-02-17 15:08   ` Ray Kinsella
2020-02-17 15:44     ` Ye Xiaolong
2020-02-17 15:49       ` Ray Kinsella
2020-02-18  8:26         ` Mcnamara, John
2020-02-18  9:12           ` Ray Kinsella
2020-02-18  9:32             ` Thomas Monjalon
2020-02-18  9:49               ` Ye Xiaolong
2020-02-18 10:08                 ` Ray Kinsella
2020-02-21 21:08   ` Thomas Monjalon

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