From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mails.dpdk.org (mails.dpdk.org [217.70.189.124]) by inbox.dpdk.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5F6BB45AA5; Fri, 4 Oct 2024 02:04:36 +0200 (CEST) Received: from mails.dpdk.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mails.dpdk.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2DCDC4065E; Fri, 4 Oct 2024 02:04:36 +0200 (CEST) Received: from mail-pl1-f182.google.com (mail-pl1-f182.google.com [209.85.214.182]) by mails.dpdk.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4DD684065B for ; Fri, 4 Oct 2024 02:04:35 +0200 (CEST) Received: by mail-pl1-f182.google.com with SMTP id d9443c01a7336-20b1335e4e4so14949975ad.0 for ; Thu, 03 Oct 2024 17:04:35 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=networkplumber-org.20230601.gappssmtp.com; s=20230601; t=1728000274; x=1728605074; darn=dpdk.org; h=content-transfer-encoding:mime-version:references:in-reply-to :message-id:subject:cc:to:from:date:from:to:cc:subject:date :message-id:reply-to; bh=EhO9IYg7L67wiYosq/fAZih039qM3JkMVk3jgnz+5xM=; b=fuTGJjNYEAZPll22T1O9/yCRqm5XPabXoYRVBnqJ9enVeMyRYmDxKMK8C9Gv8Qxj2M R1IKig6JVpaG8HVv7ryBIyahV1i1NQEUOEGCla7dmVkahYpUUHzj6s+9Igg3RqRZBNi2 JsOsw8riclvp3UVTPb97raO5olj4AP0bsomrzpnCushaVQR0HvYKWrWKEMyCHFcHsEDq AYdeyKp5LnJoMRy8nR5E4PhSnTl/ukOfg+IOO/6UKP0GIgETEH5XiXwYpamlQzHdl8ir fZA/8UObfsGu35HISs55sCENSMF1sFD68buqL3zwhU09kCD+/nZPMMWaPvlUdyHg7Uw8 2x6w== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20230601; t=1728000274; x=1728605074; h=content-transfer-encoding:mime-version:references:in-reply-to :message-id:subject:cc:to:from:date:x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc :subject:date:message-id:reply-to; bh=EhO9IYg7L67wiYosq/fAZih039qM3JkMVk3jgnz+5xM=; b=n4CuADa4x+1jIYg6IilvlO1vCfQBp19PREFAVWUQJH0LuGT6qoxs+pccrlpycZfQcn vC+afxsuNELJrVTqLTN+9MauAKYwiddJy8kNMNcoVs9GAWtYBBFII8uSUE3z5Al7h+Dk GZTFA15QYAxyiu4H9YPlIo0SGu6AmmOEbUffhCntW3fa9fI9mfAmQH0nuunxYBIVg0ko 6jh0EztTFZh3L9zo7UTqbM2HnKTXgHGLEyWLIk4pjH0O/8fbYukQsA8DIvnGXhLsnlIJ pebbYXkj2iB/vuSOA4PCSTA22Cdl7z/b9ygur74tCwiJw5rpoqZRSlYQ9Sn1DmLM22Zd yT9Q== X-Forwarded-Encrypted: i=1; AJvYcCUAhehRxLeiRmY6pbYsG8SRex8D4D7wkuM/I7MmQR0nmvFy+l5n9E49+OBRLfoR7ZsBS8Q=@dpdk.org X-Gm-Message-State: AOJu0YzyRQznTNnYCPZNvyBmDwJAeFDWKnOZKoY8N0dSo8ssZsEOaCan jb01VwrUZ57TE2UvKVlRQZjW81G2hnOj0LRkiiSsVX/WtYB5oYC4wSc1nOqXR9s= X-Google-Smtp-Source: AGHT+IHxrce7O432He+8q0S5Jwnzn7XALF+gF0I+1xYFc2UXGE2SoOowDFTPxBmu0uuR9JNWLchu8Q== X-Received: by 2002:a17:903:2291:b0:20b:b610:bd06 with SMTP id d9443c01a7336-20bfdfd323fmr10966055ad.19.1728000274188; Thu, 03 Oct 2024 17:04:34 -0700 (PDT) Received: from hermes.local (204-195-96-226.wavecable.com. [204.195.96.226]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id 98e67ed59e1d1-2e1e8625ccbsm121151a91.48.2024.10.03.17.04.33 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Thu, 03 Oct 2024 17:04:34 -0700 (PDT) Date: Thu, 3 Oct 2024 17:04:32 -0700 From: Stephen Hemminger To: Kai Ji Cc: Anatoly Burakov , Bernard Iremonger , dev@dpdk.org Subject: Re: [dpdk-dev v1] doc/multi-process: fixed grammar and rephrasing Message-ID: <20241003170432.35c8c775@hermes.local> In-Reply-To: <20220601095719.1168-1-kai.ji@intel.com> References: <20220601095719.1168-1-kai.ji@intel.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-BeenThere: dev@dpdk.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: DPDK patches and discussions List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: dev-bounces@dpdk.org On Wed, 1 Jun 2022 17:57:19 +0800 Kai Ji wrote: > Update and rephrasing some sentences, small improvements > made to the multi-process sample application user guide > > Fixes: d0dff9ba445e ("doc: sample application user guide") > Cc: bernard.iremonger@intel.com > > Signed-off-by: Kai Ji It's a start, but this whole document needs to be rewritten. It is overly verbose and doesn't introduce multi-process well. Giving an ack since it is better than what was there. Acked-by: Stephen Hemminger