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charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable MIME-Version: 1.0 X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: 9be0c256-dede-4e85-59f9-08d7fe654b63 X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 22 May 2020 15:32:10.4429 (UTC) X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: 46c98d88-e344-4ed4-8496-4ed7712e255d X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: Y5z2VYpeDB49McQdvQlt9RSAdyBtyFzn9fQaDIJpXUOT8wbo5X3I2jjTKt6h9Y2LpTFHR/5GbR1ZxuevK7BTXw== X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: DM6PR11MB3772 X-OriginatorOrg: intel.com Subject: Re: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v1] doc: update release notes for 20.05 X-BeenThere: dev@dpdk.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: DPDK patches and discussions List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: dev-bounces@dpdk.org Sender: "dev" Hi John, >-----Original Message----- >From: dev On Behalf Of John McNamara >Sent: Friday 22 May 2020 15:06 >To: dev@dpdk.org >Cc: thomas@monjalon.net; Mcnamara, John >Subject: [dpdk-dev] [PATCH v1] doc: update release notes for 20.05 > >Fix grammar, spelling and formatting of DPDK 20.05 release notes. > >Signed-off-by: John McNamara >--- > doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst | 264 +++++++++++++++-------------= - >---- > 1 file changed, 116 insertions(+), 148 deletions(-) > >diff --git a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst >b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst >index 8470690..d10a1f4 100644 >--- a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst >+++ b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_20_05.rst > > * **Updated Telemetry Library.** > >- The updated Telemetry library has many improvements on the original >version >- to make it more accessible and scalable: >+ The updated Telemetry library has been significantly in relation to >+ the original version to make it more accessible and scalable: I think there may be a word missing - "significantly improved in" might have been intended here. - Ciara